The Legend of the Sage of Six Paths: Two brothers!

500 years before Naruto Uzumaki is born, a young man visits two boys.

Man: I sense a very strong chakra in you two, that is why you have been chosen to carry on my legacy!

Boy Number 1: Thhank yyou, Siirrr. I Wont let you down!

Boy Number 2: (Thinking) Stupid little brother, be quite this is the strongest man to ever live!

Man: What about you Tai? Dont you have anything to say?

Boy Number 2: (Looking up with a smile on his face) Thank you Sage of six Paths!

The Boys say goodbye to their mother and father and leave with the Sage of Six Paths… 3 years pass….

A huge explosion rocks the entire area, creating a smoke cloud, Two Young men jump from the smoke, the older shouts “Fire Release: Fire Ball Jutsu!” while the younger shouts ” Lighting Release: Lightning Wave Palm” unleasing a huge eletric bolt come flying from his palm into the ground! The older boys Fire Ball destroys whats left of the ground. Both boys stand extreamly tried from the battle, Clapping can be heard coming from the where the fireball hit.

Sage of Six Paths: Well done boys, you almost tricked me.(Thinking) They are ready for the transfer but only one can take over.(Talking) Com’on boys lets get back inside before it starts raining.

As the boys walk in, they find a note from the dyinomo of the land of wind, reading: The Beast is attacking us, none of the weak ninja we have can stop it, we need you Sage of six Paths, otherwise the 10 tailed beast could destory the entire world! The sage of the Six Paths walks in with a scroll in his hand.

Boy 1: Is this true senpai?!

Sage of six Paths: Yes Zesusn, I’ll be leaving in 2 days to fight and hopefully seal the the 10 tailed beast in to a new world i call the MOON.

Boy 2: BUT SENPAI! This means you wont be transfering your power to us anytime soon!

Sage: Tai, I never go back on my word, this scroll is the key to my power being transfered to you, are you ready?! Tai and Zesusn goodbye!

A bright light comes from the scroll and shines on both the brothers, Tai’s eyes begin to glow and spin, while Zesusn’s body begins to turn White and soon both brothers fall to the ground. Tai awakens to a sharp pain in his eyes, he looks around and sees everything emmiting a different colour. 10 years pass…….

The Sage of six Paths is laying on his bed, close to death, with the brothers standing in front of him.

~ by izunaadamuchiha on November 15, 2009.

5 Responses to “The Legend of the Sage of Six Paths: Two brothers!”

  1. So, is Tai the one with the Rinnegan, or the Byakugan?

    • Thanks for reading this PainTheClown, Your a writer for Shannaro right? Anyway to anwser your question, Tai is the basically the first Uchiha and he has a Weaker Rinnegan that will become the Sharingan. Zesusn is the Senju. Anyway There was a extra bit where the Sage explained why he was dying ( Battles and the huge ammount of 10 tailed charka insife of him, and the Beginning of the Fight between the brothers, but i deleted aciddently. One question: was it good for a first post?

      • Yes, I am a writer for Shannaro1 and Shannaro2…

        It was… interesting…

        I’m not trying to be mean, but, I really don’t like the setup of your post and much of Shannaro’s posts.

        e.g. Someone: Hello…

        I like this much better…

        e.g. “Hello… Master…”

        It gives you much more feeling and depth to the story…

        Just some constructive criticism…

        But, overall, it was pretty good…

      • Thanks it will help me improve, so how did you become a writer for shannaro?

      • I became one by sending him my very first fanfic and making sure there weren’t any mistakes (spelling) It took him about 2 1/2 weeks to respond, but, he said yes…

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